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    dots Submission Name: Honeymoondots
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    Author: TheStillSilence
    ASL Info:    20/F/Out in Outer Space
    Elite Ratio:    5.1 - 180/107/54
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsHoneymoondots
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    Honeymoon phases disappear
    without a honeymoon or wedding near
    Time plays its tricks on fickle minds
    and hearts that hang to fading signs
    The sun still sets at six-oh-three
    (It rose on "us" but sets on "me")
    I watch the water carry on
    And muse how easily we get along
    We heave each sigh and feel each ache
    but carry on for lively's sake.




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