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    dots Submission Name: Things They (Don't) Saydots
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    Author: TheStillSilence
    ASL Info:    20/F/Out in Outer Space
    Elite Ratio:    5.1 - 180/107/54
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThings They (Don't) Saydots
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    Soft-spoken silhouettes of words
    play with the undertones of meaning
    Tag, Hide-N-Seek, Who's the Leader

    Always on the verge, but never quite there
    They found they can speak with shadowed verbs
    (And hide away from the bitterness of communication)

    Rigid, frigid, and cold; the air between them stands still
    Silhouettes don't need sound waves to travel
    And they don't need light waves to see




    Submitted on 2017-09-25 00:21:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Frigid fuck is fine on the prophylaxis protocol but there comes a time when one must believe in mystic symbiosis' punctuality.
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