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    Author: TheStillSilence
    ASL Info:    20/F/Out in Outer Space
    Elite Ratio:    5.1 - 180/107/54
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    The morning light will come to pass
    And try to wake us in its way
    But your soft breath will overcast
    Your beating heart entice me to stay

    A rhythmic pulse of "please stay near"
    With an afterthought of a strong embrace
    The covers serve to persevere
    the world the might tries to replace

    To hold the dawn at bay, we try
    With hands and feet that know their place
    With eyes shut tight we know each star,
    each moon, each planet in our space

    I know each path from me to you
    You know each distance in between
    The planets smile because they, too
    Have felt the fervor in our gleam

    The light can try and intercept the
    (the silent words our hearts relay)
    It can wake us in its mayhem
    But our hearts will hold the dawn at bay




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