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    dots Submission Name: When Sirens Whisper dots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 75/182/208
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsWhen Sirens Whisper dots
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    It did not start with a fiery salvo,
    of steam, dread or lead.
    No,
    it was built on the dead.
    Savagely thrumming again,
    of a familiar sound we need;
    of the familiar face of man.

    It was when sirens whisper,
    that we hear our impending future.

    Progress inevitably brings the end,
    gaunt fingers weave and loom over looms.
    No,
    it was woven in hunger.
    Tapestry unraveling again-
    the tragic story we ink;
    the tragic story of man.

    It was when sirens whisper,
    that song of an endless winter.

    Painted horizon of fire and indigo,
    smoldering cities of heroes, villains and liars.
    No,
    it was equal for all.
    Return to sand-
    who will know us;
    who will write our end,
    when the sirens whisper again.




    Submitted on 2017-09-25 21:31:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Apparently your succubi are extraterrestrial. Take care..........plague.
    | Posted on 2017-09-25 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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