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    dots Submission Name: To the Artistdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/211
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 980
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    dotsTo the Artistdots
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    Water colored thoughts crash a maligned shore,
    unaware of the absent sands,
    gored upon the rocks,
    worn from the hands.

    Hues of their eyes painted light,
    indigo, carmine and canary,
    with a final stroke into black,
    brushed the night.

    Oil thy canvas,
    soak it with blood.

    Wrought thy steel,
    sculpt it with desire

    Ink thy paper,
    scribe it with forever

    A blind man cannot see,
    yet feels the colors of true artistry.




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