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    dots Submission Name: Dreamdots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       My Beautiful everything


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    dotsDreamdots
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    Once,
    in a dream
    there was greatness perceived.
    I held it for me.

    But that greatness it seems,
    leaves nothing for me,
    without you in that dream.

    Now only for me,
    this fabulous dream,
    leaves you, next to me.

    That dream that came true.
    That dream that was you,
    once,
    was just a fairy tale.




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