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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 354
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
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    Well I know I never met you
    But I know you'd be beautiful
    I never got to hold you
    And I'll never see your face

    As I sit here crying out for you
    All I can do is pray within this pain
    I can hardly even breathe tonight
    Wishing you were here with me

    Oh, I couldn't save you
    I'll never raise you
    I'll never sing you back to sleep

    Won't hear you say mommy
    No need to say sorry
    Nothing can bring you back to me

    The pain is getting stronger
    Every second I lay here
    My worry for you may be over
    But I am sinking in this fear

    Drowning deeply in my sorrow
    As I think about this loss
    But I'll lay this burden down now
    At the foot of the mighty cross

    Oh, I couldn't save you
    I'll never raise you
    I'll never sing you back to sleep

    Won't hear you say mommy
    No need to say sorry
    Nothing can bring you back to me

    And even though you're gone
    I have to carry on
    I just wanted you to know
    Oh, that I love you so

    I'll never see your smile
    I'll never hear you speak
    But I will always love you
    And I hope that you'd love me

    There's nothing I could do
    No way I could have known
    That you weren't meant to be
    And so it saddens me

    That I couldn't save you
    That I'll never raise you
    That I'll never sing you back to sleep

    Won't hear you say mommy
    No need to say sorry
    Nothing can bring you back to me

    Oh, I couldn't save you
    I'll never raise you
    I'll never sing you back to sleep

    Won't hear you say mommy
    No need to say sorry
    Nothing can bring you back to me

    And even though you're gone
    I have to carry on
    I just wanted you to know
    Oh, that I love you so

    I just wanted you to know
    Oh, how I love you so




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      I really feel the sadness of this.. not sure if this is a miscarriage but it feels like it. Emotionally. Take care of yourself. I hope someone sings it out for you, I did as I was reading it.
    | Posted on 2017-10-20 00:00:00 | by KeeperOfLight | [ Reply to This ]


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