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    dots Submission Name: The World dots
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    Author: jjd
    ASL Info:    20/male/Griffin, Ga.
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 20/78/34
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 1032
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    Description:
       A brief thought about the world as I see it in my eyes.


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    dotsThe World dots
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    Today we live in generation XYZ.
    a generation that has no idea of whats really going on.
    we have people mad at white people for slavery that happen many years ago.
    TO THOSE WHO ARE PISSED OVER SLAVERY,
    please get over yourself. You never picked cotton, you never was slaved into chains. we the white people owe you anything.
    I live in a country where everyone is free.
    deal with it. unless you want to be slave.

    we have many different religions in the world, and they all preach about peace and love, and yet here we are fighting over religion. If someone believes in something different than you, that doesn't give you the right to be cruel to someone.
    love one another.
    MLK did not fight so hard to give rights to black just for yall to be assholes to the whites. the people who own slaves are all dead.

    There is only one explanations about why someone feels that way and that's because of their parents.
    Every day a new born id brought into this world and it the parents responsibility to teach their children to love one another. and it is only the parents fault for someone to grow up hating a certin type of person.
    so fuck you parents that messed on generation XYZ.



    To Be Continued....




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