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    dots Submission Name: Across the beddots
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    Author: expiring_touch
    ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 137/245/159
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsAcross the beddots
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    and if I don’t get up
    to right
    where will it go, electric
    current up whose nerve
    ending the clock
    is still an hour shy
    of midnight -- & don’t I know
    that this
    will be a restless
    one?




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