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    dots Submission Name: Vortex: The Imagination That Isdots

    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 41/64/76
    Words: 478
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsVortex: The Imagination That Isdots

    You’re gonna have to try really hard
    to change my mind.

    I don’t ever want to worry about
    any kind of figurative crime,
    unless its mine,
    I don’t even want to abstain my mind

    That means

    Any limitations that stop me blind,
    any kind of configuration that doesn’t tell me why
    has no place in my mind,

    let the solar light find its own kind

    ill always turn away from anything that doesn’t help me shine

    let its vibrations transcend the speed of light
    turning the worlds time,
    and mine

    let me grasp this worlds indignation full of captive turnings in its remunerations by falling for the nostalgic tribulations

    hold my hand,

    don’t breeze by,

    let the moment fall on your shoulders,
    and let it take you somewhere,
    somewhere far and not real,

    Somewhere that you could only imagine

    Just try and make it your own figurative crime

    Let your desires make your own time

    Let the versatile world shine its million year old ligh

    it’s a Star

    Let it be me that breaks you free Let me hold your hand

    and take you through the vortex of the imagination that is.

    The sun shines as it is the speed of light that craves everything you might.

    It’s vibrations work to seek and transcend anything in its molarity,

    in its infusion so to speak.

    So every time you just make do, you’re only standing back
    far from what you can really do,

    take my hand
    so that I can bring you through the vortex of the imagination that is.

    take my hand, hold my hand
    Glimpse this world, as you really see it

    Don’t let it be configured by someone that doesn’t tell you why,

    as it has no place in your mind there’s no need to abstain

    let the solar light find you
    it will help you shine,

    Bask in its speed of light,
    while watching and feeling the might of your world


    I can let you go,
    so you can do the same,
    use that vortex and breath easy,

    Don’t worry about any kind of figurative crime

    Unless its yours, That means,

    Its your turn, find someone, return the favor,

    Take them to be a star of their own unlimited world full of no indignation that holds its own captivation while not remunerating by falling in its own nostalgic tribulations!

    Let the moment fall on their shoulders,
    and let it take them somewhere far,
    somewhere only they could imagine.

    Let them take your hand, hold your hand,
    and keep holding your hand

    Until they can let go and find,
    The imagination that is.

    Submitted on 2017-10-20 23:35:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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