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    dots Submission Name: The Poems Deathdots
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    Author: Mepoduo
    Elite Ratio:    5.07 - 1/1/1
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Still working on some formatting, rhythm, spacing and so on. I found a book full of my old writings that I never got around to publishing so keep an eye out for some more.



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    dotsThe Poems Deathdots
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    Let this pen speak its truth!
    We all stop and stare,
    watching her glide over her mate
    pulling words right from the air.

    We watch her dance so innocent
    She makes mountains move at will
    For anything is possible
    With plenty ink to spill.




    Submitted on 2017-10-21 20:50:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice one.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2017-11-04 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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