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    dots Submission Name: Reliquary of Writdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 75/182/217
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsReliquary of Writdots
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    Watercolors made me forget Rembrandt,
    forsaking the acrylics of imagination
    for murky smears of idolatry-
    in writ or script;
    scripture or skit.
    The places thoughts glow,
    radiant strokes of Van Gogh,
    Illuminated character
    defined such lines.

    Caravaggio colored poetic, dark or light,
    spectrum of humanity
    Alighieri, not contrived.
    Through words we live and die,
    on the shores of delirium-
    where Poe had left and arrived.
    A life by design,
    as real as fable or divine
    until our candle sees the sky-
    and eternal sleep arrives.




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