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    dots Submission Name: Life is momentsdots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 262/107/51
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLife is momentsdots
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    Life is moments

    Some get more.
    Some get less.

    Some get happy.
    Some get unhappy.

    Some get successful.
    Some get unsuccessful.

    Some get productive.
    Some get unproductive.

    Some get healthy.
    Some get unhealthy.

    Some get serene.
    Some get turbulent.

    Some live the moments.
    Some do not live the moments.




    Submitted on 2017-10-28 23:22:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes, though the past indeed was and the future indeed will be we live in the present. The moment is what we live. Some folks are too involved in the future's prospectus or the past's analysis to notice this.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2017-10-29 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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