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Lilitu


Author: endlessgame23
ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 28 /42 /44
Words: 146
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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Lilitu



high up in The Tower
Prisoner of Insanity
bound by your own Power
Queen of Calamity

locked away and hidden
Witch of Blasphemy
truth comes unbidden
woven in your tapestry

the lines and ridges of your flesh
reveal your sordid story
Heaven cursed, Devil's Blessed
Angels weep our glory

Forgotten Love, I remember
surrendered Love, I'm sorry
I smolder in the embers
of what We used to be

I'd walk beneath the ocean
just to have you near me
I'd drink the poison potion
if that would set you free

I gave you my devotion
Heart and Soul eternally
until my Oath was broken
if only, if only..




Submitted on 2017-11-02 14:38:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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