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    dots Submission Name: Lilitudots
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    Author: endlessgame23
    ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 28/41/44
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsLilitudots
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    high up in The Tower
    Prisoner of Insanity
    bound by your own Power
    Queen of Calamity

    locked away and hidden
    Witch of Blasphemy
    truth comes unbidden
    woven in your tapestry

    the lines and ridges of your flesh
    reveal your sordid story
    Heaven cursed, Devil's Blessed
    Angels weep our glory

    Forgotten Love, I remember
    surrendered Love, I'm sorry
    I smolder in the embers
    of what We used to be

    I'd walk beneath the ocean
    just to have you near me
    I'd drink the poison potion
    if that would set you free

    I gave you my devotion
    Heart and Soul eternally
    until my Oath was broken
    if only, if only..




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