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    dots Submission Name: Shut Updots
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    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    49/f/LA
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 327/382/121
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 37
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 693



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    dotsShut Updots
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    Mid-sentence he stopped me
    Dropped me
    Caught me on the chin
    Said shut the
    Shut the
    Shut the fuck up
    Fuck up
    Fuck up
    Why you such a fuck up
    You can't do nothing
    You can't do nothing
    You can't do nothing 'bout it bitch
    Cry cry cry
    Cry to your momma
    Cry to your daddy
    Cry baby cry
    Baby you ain't going nowhere
    No how no way
    No way
    No way
    No way out
    No way out
    No way out
    No way -

    Mid-sentence I stopped him
    Dropped him
    Caught him in the temple

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