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    dots Submission Name: I, Plutarchdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsI, Plutarchdots
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    I, Plutarch
    born of silt and sand, flesh and man.
    My feet upon the broken bricks,
    stones and wits of the Lyceum.
    With words I weep through pen or key,
    characters inscribed by ink or light.
    This duality,
    Parallel lives-
    creeps out through a familiar syntax,
    diction defined.
    That I, a man of this world,
    toiling through introspective decline-
    relishes opportunities to become immortal,
    in either philosophies or lies.

    I, Plutarch
    search for heroes to arrive,
    leading better men to a better time.
    but, alas we are here-
    trapped under pathetic waste,
    gluttonous filth the great worm consumes,
    the Cerberus within us all.
    I, torn into three,
    of man, of me and of machine.
    Rise to conquer machination or beast,
    slough of sinew and wire,
    oil and blood-
    filth of dual realities.

    I, Plutarch
    resign myself to this design,
    that we know of no deities
    that reign or define,
    just what they are,
    and how we’ve arrived.
    I know nothing of the nothing,
    yet clearly some substance,
    of intellection and mind,
    searches for heroes and gods,
    to understand,
    how to become immortal,
    within these parallel lives,
    of which I write,
    until I die.




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