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    dots Submission Name: to Be likedots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 41/64/76
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 1213
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    dotsto Be likedots
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    War was
    Self identity
    Frozen
    Unable
    to keep
    moving
    Indigenous
    Am I native
    Or colonial
    A killer
    My blood
    still suffers
    Inside
    my mind
    Skin color
    doesn’t rhyme
    Again
    Self identity
    Explore with film
    Watch
    Help
    Me
    break free
    Im scared
    of family
    To be
    a family
    Im afraid
    i’ll always be
    Far away
    So I went away
    Further
    from my roots
    Because
    I don’t know
    what
    They are
    I don’t want
    to be
    like
    my mommy
    Addicted
    prone to loosing
    Running
    Hiding her
    spirit
    I don’t want
    to be
    like my daddy
    Stuck by
    his choices
    Gifted by
    his children
    Waiting for
    the world
    To tell me
    where
    I’m going




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