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    dots Submission Name: Suffer The Childrendots
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    Author: poetotoe
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    dotsSuffer The Childrendots
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    Suffer The Children

    They killed your and brothers and sisters knowingly, past and present, though did not sexually or petulantly abuse them all. But they did send them to die in mass numbers to return physically, mentally challenged, suicidal, drug-induced, and drug-dependent.

    The progressive party playrights of the MSM of both Houses, the Pentagon enlists and fast amounts of money can pay-off. They till and toil the brave and willing to die and suffer, if need be, suffer the consequences of their perceived elector's words dressed up too kill you.




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      The line "They till and toil the brave and willing to die and suffer, if need be, suffer the consequences of their perceived elector's words dressed up too kill you." Was powerful and stung because this is the stuff that can start controversies which means it's good. I like your visual of the politics and how the children suffer. Wars fought from greed and continue for the politicians entertainment. The reality is sad when you can see behind the scene. Thanks for sharing


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    | Posted on 2017-11-18 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]


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