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    dots Submission Name: Comme un lion en avrildots
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    Author: Outlaw
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 510/413/195
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       it's unclear, and I don't really have the words to create the tension, but the idea is that the he pronoun refers to both the role model upon which her romance is based, and also the actual he in which it currently resides. Her father and the man she shares her bed with if you will. I'm looking to eventually work in more lion imagery. Spring, maybe, and the pallor of snow too.


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    dotsComme un lion en avrildots
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    a fallen claw, left behind, picked up
    like an heirloom, but re-purposed in the modern way.
    she's kindled by a passion, despite being brought up
    by the tendrils of uncaring, unable to say
    he is my warmth

    instead she clings by the might of her bite
    to a stone ledge, an unrequiting dalliance.
    she scrapes the claw, again and unlike
    her, it creates warmth within compliance.

    he steals from me and yet she clings
    to his body, a desperate rescue amidst the storm.
    she is a murky pearl, a cloudy jade, a beige stratus
    before his trembling and towering weakness.
    all too familiar a touch, still strangers at heart.

    youth is brutal like the billowing of bullying
    whispers softly against a child's eardrums
    pouring in the serum of self-effacing
    depression, a simple lock that takes years to come apart.

    youth is desperate like the words of the moribund,
    a cumulonimbus striking at the earth quickly, yet lingering
    ever feeling tension and fecund attraction --
    ripping at the seams like an oncoming convulsion.

    she is a victim of this youth, and he is her victim.




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