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    dots Submission Name: I AM THANKFUL FORdots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 267/107/54
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI AM THANKFUL FORdots
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    I am thankful for both
    joy and pain.

    Joy nurtured me.
    Pain ruptured me.

    Joy pampered me.
    Pain dampened me.

    Joy relaxed me.
    Pain stressed me.

    Joy snuggled me.
    Pain struggled me.

    Joy taught me peace.
    Pain taught me hope.

    Joy showed me light.
    Pain showed me dark and then light.

    Joy made me strive.
    Pain made me strive harder.

    I am thankful for both
    joy and pain.




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