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    dots Submission Name: Deep Into A World Of Despairdots
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    Author: DeathTone
    ASL Info:    32 / Male / United States
    Elite Ratio:    5.54 - 81/55/30
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 656
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    Bytes: 600



    Description:
       Just feeling emotionally drained at the moment it was written.


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    dotsDeep Into A World Of Despairdots
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    Sunk deep into a world of despair
    Cold and dark like the pitch of darkness
    Emptiness dwells and spreads at the very roots
    Wallowing and swallowing the light, which no longer exists
    It spills over like a cup of black water, unable to withhold its contents
    Blinded by the night, lost without sight
    Right is left and left is right
    It feeds the very soul, and grows, fertilized by each sparkle of twilight
    An endless path, traveled in an endless spiral of missery
    Pain is within, sunk deep into a world of Despair

    -Death Tone-




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