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    Author: poetotoe
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    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsRedemption dots
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    Redemption

    As these years and tears fly bye
    what of love lost in time, our love
    we bed in rock, as a commandment.

    These years and tears do wear away
    an artist captured in a brush stroke
    another captured in a chisel blow.

    Our hearts come alive once more
    at the Auction-Block in London
    New York, in Rome's Basilica.

    Love, the essence of eternal life
    some to never know, too never see
    the love portrayed before their king.

    The queens of lust and greed agree on
    a witch, that bitch declared they did win
    captured us to torture our love to no avail.




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