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Author: ShyOne
Elite Ratio:    8 - 31 /14 /25
Words: 346
Class/Type: Poetry /Political
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what's the point of my position
when there's no one here to know
on and on in each direction
i am still alone

viable and varied maybe i can make a dent
but what's the point of saying
when the truth won't make much sense

the density of this situation
coupled with my mind
is the hardest thing to lose
and the quickest thing to find

value at the valley
take a token for your taste
i'll surrender to the sound
when i'm just about to break

back and forth for periods of time
i'll decide the path to take
and get what's truly mine

you can have your own decision
i'll decide upon my own
but i'll be fine the 100th time
you haunt my happy home

you can whisper in the cloud
when i forget your name
but be careful with your doubts
because this is not a game

ask me accidentaly
tell me all the time
ask me for a melody
i truly do not mind
take it all for granted
if it happens every day
but do not take it all
everything will fade

taste it for a second
medicate your mind
the cure is in the spaces
out of space and time
ask for elementry
school is for the rest
i can steal the course
because i passed the test

situation complication has me mostly baseless looking for a better bracelet shining brightly utter nonsese for the peek in last weeks window what am i if not afraid now that all the pieces fit what is it i have made.

the last thing on your mind
is the first that i can tell
so thank you for the memories
in this cut rate seat in hell
after all the flicker
the lights will work just fine
masking all the motion
is the closest to a lie

eenie meenie minee mow
that's the river left to row
i don't need a new way out
the whole way in
i'm almost out.

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