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    dots Submission Name: winners circledots
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    Author: ShyOne
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 30/12/24
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Spoof/Serious
    Total Views: 30
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 617



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    dotswinners circledots
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    somewhere on the new horizon
    i am seen more clearly
    when the proof is in my hand
    and the truth is truly near me

    i'm watching the fire in my head
    all the smoke billows again
    smothered once
    woke up twice
    another dreamless
    winters night

    if i measure all the motions
    will you move me with your eyes
    until we're both below the notion
    of another damned surprise
    the vision never leaves me
    and the path is mostly paved
    so i'm walking past the finish line
    acting well behaved




    Submitted on 2017-12-03 22:01:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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