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Author: saartha
ASL Info:    27/F/US
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Cover


It's fall and so
there's a thick layer
of migratory birds

like a down blanket
spread over the fields

Simple as a songbird
I took a nap when the dark
welled up behind the mountains.




Submitted on 2017-12-04 00:39:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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