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    Author: saartha
    ASL Info:    27/F/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.06 - 230/384/131
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    It's fall and so
    there's a thick layer
    of migratory birds

    like a down blanket
    spread over the fields

    Simple as a songbird
    I took a nap when the dark
    welled up behind the mountains.




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