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    dots Submission Name: Physician, Heal Thyselfdots
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    Author: WriteSomething
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 24/22/9
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPhysician, Heal Thyselfdots
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    You will never 'fix' me
    so if that is why you stay--
    heavy with obligations
    repetitive movements,
    hanging in the middle
    like a balloon losing air--
    please pack your life up
    and take it somewhere
    you'll be happy.
    How could I ever love you,
    when I don't love myself?

    But secretly, I really I do
    love myself. I just don't
    love you.

    I actually enjoy my time
    alone, and I like drinking
    by myself in the dark,
    and dear god, how I love
    laying in bed reading a book
    without listening to you
    breathe.

    And I hate fucking you...
    the sad foreplay of slow kisses,
    and your predictable movements
    that are supposed to heat me up
    but force me to end up faking it
    while screaming inside my head
    for it to finally end.

    My depression has a name,
    and my life would be better
    without speaking it again,
    but you are still undiagnosed
    and only love broken things
    because you need to "fix" it all
    like a little boy playing doctor
    with a toy box doll.






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      I can relate how depression has taken it's toll slowly upon you. I feel the same way and coming here "sometimes" relieve some symptoms of depression its a gateway to other experiences and mind stimulating poems. IDK find away out and write about how you got out of it so you can help me lol nice write thanx.
    | Posted on 2018-01-03 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]


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