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    dots Submission Name: Blood Stains Are The Worstdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 5/119/134
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBlood Stains Are The Worstdots
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    Blood leaves a nasty stain.
    Perhaps that is why our hearts are red.
    For our hearts are what bring us the most pain.

    Forcing us to make blood.
    Showing us what happens when we get cut.
    Preparing us for when we don't see the blade.

    Luckily though blood does dry.
    The pain slowly but surely subsides.
    Leaving behind only scars of a broken heart.





    Submitted on 2017-12-21 15:03:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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