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    Author: Daniel Barlow
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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         just because it has been the same day
         for a thousand days - does not mean that that is
         all there is to a day.





         i think about the pan on the stove,
         what if the metal resisted,
         told the element - just to be cool

         

         i am life - and i move like some smoke filled air sensing a crack in the window




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