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    Author: Daniel Barlow
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    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsshimmerdots
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         i know you have felt neglected,
         slipped the moorings like some little yacht
         no-one has paid any mind to
         jostling. rising, falling on the swell.

         i know that feeling - a great distance. nowhere really.
         like riding the forks of lightning





         i'll just stare at you
         grab hold of your
         soul.






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