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Author:	jackz
ASL Info:	24/F/OH
Elite Ratio:	3.76 - 591/623/381
Words:	125

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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Every..... dots

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I see you in every man at the end of every off ramp
Sign reads: "Hungry please help"
Is not written in an unknown handwriting but in your handwriting

Every dollar given to a man at the end of our Cleveland off ramps
There is a little of you in them
Eyes, tone of voice, shaved head, calloused hands...

I search for you, although I know my attempts are moot
Everyday I secretly hope is the day I am shown this was all a sick joke

But...

I see you in every man at the end of every off ramp
Sign reads: "Hungry please help"
Is not written in an unknown handwriting but in your handwriting

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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It means a lot to them, as it does to you.