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    dots Submission Name: Every.....dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsEvery.....dots
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    I see you in every man at the end of every off ramp
    Sign reads: "Hungry please help"
    Is not written in an unknown handwriting but in your handwriting

    Every dollar given to a man at the end of our Cleveland off ramps
    There is a little of you in them
    Eyes, tone of voice, shaved head, calloused hands...

    I search for you, although I know my attempts are moot
    Everyday I secretly hope is the day I am shown this was all a sick joke

    But...

    I see you in every man at the end of every off ramp
    Sign reads: "Hungry please help"
    Is not written in an unknown handwriting but in your handwriting





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