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    dots Submission Name: 4th Season of Vivaldi dots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dots4th Season of Vivaldi dots
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    Winter as lictor,
    which tithes our tired sun,
    into ghoulish predilections for
    the naive sons, soldiers, daughters and whores.

    Cannibalistic ne'er-do-well,
    unaware that feast or famine,
    leads malevolent men to cemetery bells
    to shovels and spades which dug wells,
    cold earth and Hell.

    Time embraced fire,
    taxing mind of William Occam,
    to collapse on the razor shores in icey ire
    of God or damned dreams, deities and desires.

    Altruistic martyr,
    sacrificed in the name of,
    circumincession or perhaps farther
    along false dichotomies to a song which habors
    humanity no longer.




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