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    dots Submission Name: The Severed Headdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 75/191/245
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsThe Severed Headdots
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    To speak of a society spoiled two-fold,
    heroic in character,
    yet absent in measure.
    That of ideals, which manifested
    have foretold of no greater destiny,
    than that of pleasure.

    A glance over pages already wrote
    reveals the bastardized
    words great men spoke,
    twisted to statuary, like the counterfeit holy
    and sold into chattel.

    Great minds do not draw lines,
    nor do they divide.
    They ask questions,
    and find better ways to define,
    which of us must rise, and how others will die.

    A feast for the great men of Galilee-
    perspective grudge and conscious,
    and how we,
    consume nightly, the cornucopia of desire
    that overflows with wishes, with misery.

    Ask and receive,
    the head of John the Baptist,
    look into his eyes and see,
    witch hunts and us, as society
    paralleled with the rising sea.

    Consumed by self-satisfaction,
    pariahs and prostrated accountability.

    Silver platters, severed heads,
    trophies that we feast upon,
    until our deserving end.




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