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    dots Submission Name: PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary...dots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 735
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       Happy Anniversary Elite been with ya for 10 years or so... Good to be back..


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    dotsPEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary...dots
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    Sitting on my sofa thinking the day away
    Thinking about my life and where had I stray
    Remembering the time I had good and bad
    The events that impacted my life happy to sad
    Mothers warning that I repeat to my child
    Fathers sternness, yet secretly proud
    The chances I had and the chances I lost
    From the birth of my child to my grandfathers loss
    Life flashed before me that afternoon
    I wouldn’t change it for the world
    Knowing I have a child in the other room
    I’m his oyster and he’s my pearl…




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