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    dots Submission Name: Your Loverdots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/806/391
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Me
    Total Views: 68
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       Exclusively for Eliteskills.com 2018 Happy New years been with ya for 19 years plus its been awhile but maybe I am back depends on my views and comments night from North America...


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    dotsYour Loverdots
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    Been lonely even though I'm with you
    been wanting to leave wanting it through
    wanting to be happy
    something you can't seen to do

    Tired of pretending
    tired of the lies
    tired of the restless night
    wondering why

    Been packing, slowly moving out
    you haven't even noticed
    what was that about

    I want to be happy, deserve it so
    moving on would be my best bet
    just wanted you to know
    hope you're okay no regrets

    Who knows what the future holds
    who knows we could bump into each other
    but until then please know
    I could never be your lover...

    S.H.




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      The write is full of grievance because of a bad relationship. True love is rare to find and is a true gift of Almighty Lord.
    | Posted on 2018-01-15 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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