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Exclusively for Eliteskills.com 2018 Happy New years been with ya for 19 years plus its been awhile but maybe I am back depends on my views and comments night from North America...
Been lonely even though I'm with you
been wanting to leave wanting it through
wanting to be happy
something you can't seen to do
Tired of pretending
tired of the lies
tired of the restless night
Been packing, slowly moving out
you haven't even noticed
what was that about
I want to be happy, deserve it so
moving on would be my best bet
just wanted you to know
hope you're okay no regrets
Who knows what the future holds
who knows we could bump into each other
but until then please know
I could never be your lover...
Submitted on 2018-01-01 20:56:05
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The write is full of grievance because of a bad relationship. True love is rare to find and is a true gift of Almighty Lord.
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