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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2126/2083/1587
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       came from a picture of a sick boy


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         lately - i am rapt in the contemplation of listening, the weaving
         of my aura,
         as it moves around my body,
         and - what that might
         mean



         

         i rock. complete, in the complex notion of brevity.
         what if, the total, the sum
         of all that i am to be was to be stripped clean of this earth.
         a mountain, removed from the
         landscape.









         a great worry.








         a great virtue.





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