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    Author: Daniel Barlow
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         i must trust that there is mana in my magic.
         a purpose, to which i move toward, in practice, even if
         it may be that others are oblivious


         this morning, i watched a panhandler,
         grimy - like the burlap sack,
         beg.



         

         reach out his hand for some minuscule
         good.













                  much, as if he were a blackbird.





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