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    dots Submission Name: Formal Jendots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2124/2080/1578
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsFormal Jendots
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                                                 what i find here is two people,                    
                             dancing, close.                    
                             their synchronization. yet                    
                             independent.                    




    .     an enthusiasm - so much myself,                    
         you could reach out and                    
         touch                                             

         







                                                                     why won't you?




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