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    dots Submission Name: dots

    Author: Daniel Barlow
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    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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                                                 what i find here is two people,                    
                             dancing, close.                    
                             their synchronization. yet                    

    .     an enthusiasm - so much myself,                    
         you could reach out and                    


                                                                     why won't you?

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