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i shouldn't expect it/but on the off chance you might ever read this.
maybe it's that i want to visit
ellowstone. the spirit, buoyed. heavy, with
who's to say.
maybe it's overcast that afternoon, and you can't see the mountains.
none of the animals are out.
it's snowing, and i find out i'm really not
an outdoor person.
there's been a pile up. the greyhound's been held up. i'm late making my connection.
i feel like i'm being judged - for what i have done
at a bus stop.
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