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    dots Submission Name: Or are we written in the sand?dots
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    Author: Chelebel
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    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsOr are we written in the sand?dots
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    Reaches out into the ocean
    To conjure the notions
    Of living and let live







    Being that it may.

    Our lives , my life



    all the words to say





    What the moon decides to hide



    showing only half





    because it’s shy.




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