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    dots Submission Name: Or are we written in the sand?dots

    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 53/166/172
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsOr are we written in the sand?dots

    Reaches out into the ocean
    To conjure the notions
    Of living and let live

    Being that it may.

    Our lives , my life

    all the words to say

    What the moon decides to hide

    showing only half

    because it’s shy.

    Submitted on 2018-01-17 22:37:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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