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    dots Submission Name: descentdots
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    Author: TheBadSadMan
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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    Description:
       thoughts and feelings.


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    dotsdescentdots
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    Awoke hopeful,
    stars within reach,
    only to be reminded,
    of the wretched company I keep,
    I can never reach the light,
    so luminescent,
    beaten down daily,
    sad is my descent.




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