Dashboard Light

Author: layDsayD ASL Info:    29/f/florida Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264 /243 /147 Words: 74

Class/Type: Poetry /The pain inside Total Views: 1614 Average Vote:    No vote yet. Bytes: 492

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Dashboard Light

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I love you Last text It was my I’m sorry I wasn’t though Not really I knew Of course I always fucking know It was muddy mist like hazy But still I knew I love you Last text he was in you you were in him that exact second did you see it what was that like not enough to stop you or him I fucking loved you

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