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    dots Submission Name: True Deathdots
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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 707
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    Description:
       From a collection entitled Gutted written fgron July 2017 to December 2017


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    dotsTrue Deathdots
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    only love can truly kill
    real death, not the kind that leads to another life
    the kind of death that traps you
    gutless and wandering
    walking aimlessly, bowel and sinew trailing behind
    soulless, faithless, living, but without life
    insanity buried deep, a seed planted long ago
    once dormant, stagnant, begins its slow growth
    it roots in the love, that perfect love
    every scar, took decades to harden, become white,
    now they bleed, open, and it burns again
    nostril filling stench, new and still familiar
    you will never know what you have done.
    You can’t, no one can, it is exclusive to me
    To my blood, my magic, my pain.




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