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    dots Submission Name: 4th of Julydots
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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 780
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    Description:
       From Snapshots, a collection meant to be descriptive, more visual, but with the abstract feel that i typically strive for. i am very nervous, Snapshots may not be understood, or enjoyed the the reader


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    dots4th of Julydots
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    It smells like horses, sweet grass, and cigars
    Golden pony tail…bouncing
    sky blue ribbon, he said it matched my baby blues
    worn out boots all muddy,
    looking back, I laugh, he is out of place here
    so tall and brooding, eyes down, always
    but taking it in, alert, sharp, ready
    if he had dressed to fit in, he’d be a gunfighter
    looking through straight long hair
    I’m always ahead, He can never keep up
    One of his long strides could close the gap
    He doesn’t, under his mask he smiles
    I don’t have to see it to know
    I hate the first row, but my dress is too short.
    Excuse us darlin, and I move over till I feel his thigh
    I can feel cold heat, his intake in breath
    I meet his gaze, close enough to notice his tight jaw flinch
    That’s when I saw it. I mean it had to have been there
    Building, churning, all ash, and ember, waiting for spark
    I missed the steers, the barrel races, to get his jacket from the car
    He kissed the blood away, pretty, blue ribbon all muddy under the stands




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