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    dots Submission Name: 4th of Julydots

    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       From Snapshots, a collection meant to be descriptive, more visual, but with the abstract feel that i typically strive for. i am very nervous, Snapshots may not be understood, or enjoyed the the reader

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    dots4th of Julydots

    It smells like horses, sweet grass, and cigars
    Golden pony tail…bouncing
    sky blue ribbon, he said it matched my baby blues
    worn out boots all muddy,
    looking back, I laugh, he is out of place here
    so tall and brooding, eyes down, always
    but taking it in, alert, sharp, ready
    if he had dressed to fit in, he’d be a gunfighter
    looking through straight long hair
    I’m always ahead, He can never keep up
    One of his long strides could close the gap
    He doesn’t, under his mask he smiles
    I don’t have to see it to know
    I hate the first row, but my dress is too short.
    Excuse us darlin, and I move over till I feel his thigh
    I can feel cold heat, his intake in breath
    I meet his gaze, close enough to notice his tight jaw flinch
    That’s when I saw it. I mean it had to have been there
    Building, churning, all ash, and ember, waiting for spark
    I missed the steers, the barrel races, to get his jacket from the car
    He kissed the blood away, pretty, blue ribbon all muddy under the stands

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